My soul is tired for it knows no sleep, my mind is lost in thoughts so deep.

My heart it breaks because of you,
the lies you told were never true.

My head it hurts from all the crying, inside screaming and slowly dying.

My eyes weigh heavy to stay awake,
to see inside you all that is fake.

My mouth speaks words to your ears, a storm upon you of all my tears.

My hand I reach out for your touch alone,
the fear that apart we have grown.

My body aches for your love once more,
a shameful desire from my inner core.

My ears they bleed from the sound of your voice,
emotions rise without a choice.

My secrets embrace me and take my breath,
I wish to be released from this painful death.


  1. Beautiful but sad

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  2. Its a really beautiful poem sad and touching. I’m not criticizing but I think it might read a bit smoother if you broke the lines up so instead of one long paragraph each rhyme or two had it’s own line.
    “My eyes weigh heavy to stay awake,
    to see inside you all that is fake.
    My mouth speaks words to your ears,
    a storm upon you of all my tears”
    But it’s really pretty as is.

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    • Thank you. I have done a couple of poems like that, as you have suggested but I wasn’t sure if it was to spacey, you know? I thought it might annoy people as they were reading it, so I figured I’d stick to single spacing. I’ll do the next one with the double spacing. Thank you again, I appreciate it very much. 😊

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      • Not a problem, and i dont know some people might like that way better but I always prefer the double spaced


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